This is done amazingly, I like the lighting it can make ones imagination go a mile a minute. To me it's like the lips and tongues represent her being molested at night. The creek of light is like someone opening the door and she's anticipating what is going to happen and feels like a monster is attacking her. Not sure if that was what you were going for, but that's what I got from it. Either way it's nicely done!
Very nice! It remembers me from something from the game Breath of Fire IV for PS1. In a place where they tried to create a god, and the limbs of a girl grew up to huge forms into a building. But yours sure have a better feeling!